Navigating the Wilderness of Fiction: Finding Your Way When Lost in the Plot
by Olivia Salter
In the dense forest of fiction writing, it’s easy to lose your way. Margaret Atwood, a literary giant, offers sage advice for writers who find themselves stuck: “Don’t sit down in the middle of the woods. If you’re lost in the plot or blocked, retrace your steps to where you went wrong. Then take the other road. And/or change the person. Change the tense. Change the opening page.”
This quote encapsulates the essence of problem-solving in creative writing. Let’s break down how you can apply Atwood’s wisdom to your own writing journey.
Retrace Your Steps
When you hit a roadblock in your story, the first step is to go back. Identify the point where your narrative started to falter. Was it a character decision that felt forced? A plot twist that didn’t quite land? By pinpointing the moment things went awry, you can better understand what needs to change.
Take the Other Road
Once you’ve identified the problem, consider alternative paths. What if your character made a different choice? What if the plot took an unexpected turn? Exploring these “what ifs” can open up new possibilities and reignite your creativity.
Change the Person
Sometimes, the issue lies with the perspective. If your story is told from a particular character’s point of view, try switching to another character. This can provide fresh insights and new angles on the same events, enriching your narrative.
Change the Tense
The tense of your story can significantly impact its tone and pace. If you’re writing in the past tense and it feels sluggish, try switching to the present tense for a more immediate and dynamic feel. Conversely, if the present tense feels too intense, the past tense might offer a more reflective and measured approach.
Change the Opening Page
The beginning of your story sets the stage for everything that follows. If you’re stuck, consider rewriting your opening. A new starting point can change the trajectory of your entire narrative, providing a fresh perspective and new momentum.
