Writing the Perfect Scene

 

by Olivia Salter

Writing the perfect scene in a fictional novel involves a delicate balance of structure, emotion, and purpose. Let’s dive into the key elements:

1. Large-Scale Structure of a Scene

A scene has two levels of structure:

• Objective: To create a powerful emotional experience for the reader.
• How to Achieve It:
  • Start Late, End Early: Jump into the action as late as possible and exit before it drags.
  • Use an Engine: Every scene should propel the reader through the story by advancing the plot or revealing character insights.
  • Multitask: Scenes can serve multiple purposes (e.g., reveal backstory, introduce conflict, deepen relationships).
  • Play With Time: Vary pacing by stretching or compressing time within a scene.
  • Cannibalize Other Scenes: Combine scenes to streamline the narrative.
  • Supercharge Conflict: Introduce tension, obstacles, and stakes.
  • Character Change: Show how the characters evolve or react.
  • Essential to Plot Progression: Ensure each scene contributes to the overall story.

2. Small-Scale Structure of a Scene

Within a scene, consider:

• Setting: Describe the environment vividly.
• Characterization: Reveal character traits, emotions, and motivations.
• Dialogue: Use authentic dialogue to advance the plot or deepen relationships.
• Action: Show characters doing something relevant.
• Emotion: Evoke feelings through sensory details.
• Conflict: Introduce tension or obstacles.
• Resolution: End with a sense of change or anticipation.

Remember, perfection lies in creating a rich emotional experience for your reader. 

Happy writing!!!

 

Also see:

• Writing The Perfect Scene by Randy Ingermanson
• How to Write a Dynamite Scene Using the Snowflake Method