A Quick Note on Writing Flash Fiction for the Novice Writer by Ryker J. Phoenix

 

 A Quick Note on Writing Flash Fiction for the Novice Writer

 

by Ryker J. Phoenix

 

  Flash fiction, also known as micro fiction or sudden fiction, is a genre of writing that is a form of short fiction that tells a complete story in a very brief amount of space, often under 1500 words.

The most renowned writers in the English-speaking world like flash fiction because it can capture profound truths and common human emotions in only a few brief phrases. Flash fiction, when written correctly, has the power to speak universal truths and touch readers of different backgrounds. 

Take this one for instance,  "For sale: baby shoes, never worn," is a six-word story, popularly attributed to Ernest Hemingway, although the link to him is unlikely. It is an example of flash fiction in it's shortest form. The amount of emotion packed into these words inspired many writers to try their hand at the genre.

Here are some tips to help you write flash fiction:

1. Start with a concept or idea: Flash fiction often relies on a single idea or concept that is explored and executed in a concise and engaging way. This can be something simple, like a thought or a feeling, or it could be something more complex, like a specific event or situation.

2. Focus on a single character or moment: Because flash fiction is so short, it's important to limit the scope of the story. Focus on a single character or a single moment in time to create a sense of intimacy and immediacy.

3. Use sensory detail to create atmosphere: Flash fiction often relies on sensory detail to create atmosphere and evoke emotion in the reader. Use vivid detail to create a rich and immersive reading experience.

4. Make every word count: Because space is limited, every word in a piece of flash fiction needs to be carefully chosen to convey the maximum amount of information and emotion.

5. Experiment with form and structure: Flash fiction can take many different forms, from traditional narratives to experimental structures. Try playing around with different forms to find the one that best suits your story.

6. Edit ruthlessly: Because flash fiction is so condensed, editing is incredibly important. Cut any unnecessary words or phrases and make sure every sentence is contributing to the overall purpose of the story.

7. End with a twist or surprise: Flash fiction often has a twist or surprise ending that subverts the reader's expectations. Think creatively about ways to surprise your reader in the final moments of your story.

 The number one thing to remember is flash fiction writing requires control. You have to choose words wisely because of the word count restriction.

Also see:

• What Is Flash Fiction? Meaning, Characteristics, and Examples
  

 

 More Quick Notes for the Novice Writer

A Short Short Theory by Robert Olen Butler

A Short Short Theory 

BY ROBERT OLEN BUTLER

TO BE BRIEF, it is a short short story and not a prose poem because it has at its center a character who yearns.

Fiction is a temporal art form. Poetry can choose to ignore the passage of time, for there is a clear sense of a poem being an object, composed densely of words, existing in space. This is true even when the length of the line is not an objectifying part of the form, as in a prose poem. And a poem need not overtly concern itself with a human subject. But when you have a human being centrally present in a literary work and you let the line length run on and you turn the page, you are, as they say in a long storytelling tradition, “upon a time.” And as any Buddhist will tell you, a human being (or a “character”) cannot exist for even a few seconds of time on planet Earth without desiring something. Yearning for something, a word I prefer because it suggests the deepest level of desire, where literature strives to go. Fiction is the art form of human yearning, no matter how long or short that work of fiction is.

James Joyce spoke of a crucial characteristic of the literary art form, something he called the epiphany, a term he appropriated from the Catholic Church meaning, literally, a “shining forth.” The Church uses it to describe the shining forth of the divinity of the baby Jesus. The word made flesh. In literary art, the flesh is made word. And Joyce suggests that a work of fiction moves to a moment at the end where something about the human condition shines forth in its essence.

I agree. But I also believe that all good fiction has two epiphanies. There is the one Joyce describes, and there is an earlier epiphany, very near the beginning of a story (or a novel), when the yearning of the character shines forth. This does not happen in explanatory terms but rather is a result of the presence of that yearning in all the tiny, sense-driven, organically resonant moments in the fiction, the accumulation of which reaches a critical mass which then produces that shining forth.

And because of the extreme brevity of the short short story, these two epiphanies often—even typically—occur at the same moment. The final epiphany of a literary short short is also the shining forth of the character’s yearning.

It has been traditional to think that a story has to have a “plot,” while a poem does not. Plot, in fact, is yearning challenged and thwarted. A short short story, in its brevity, may not have a fully developed plot, but it must have the essence of a plot: yearning.

 

A Flash Fiction Exercise

Write a story that depicts two characters who are both yearning for something. They should be in a relationship—romantic, familial, social—and their needs should be in opposition to each other, or should be challenged and thwarted, one by the other. Create background events that provide a foil to the characters' inner desires, further layering your plot.

  

Except from "The Rose Metal Press Field Guide to Writing Flash Fiction: Tips from Editors, Teachers, and Writers in the Field by Tara L. Masih."

 

About the Author 

Robert Olen Butler is the author of numerous works of fiction, including A Good Scent from a Strange Mountain, winner of the 1993 Pulitzer Prize; Weegee Stories (Narrative Library); A Small Hotel; The Hot Country; The Star of Istanbul; The Empire of Night; and the story collection Tabloid Dreams, which has been reissued. Among his numerous accolades are two National Magazine Awards in Fiction, the Richard and Hinda Rosenthal Award from the American Academy of Arts and Letters, and the 2013 F. Scott Fitzgerald Award for Outstanding Achievement in American Literature. Butler teaches creative writing at Florida State University.

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